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The energetic sunspot known to solar astronomers as AR 12192, is nearly 20 times the surface area of Earth . . . Its largest flares produced as much energy as a billion thermonuclear weapons. WSJ 10/30/2014

mighty in power u n a c bright sun flares l h into space your love-kiss consumes me David Meade Live Generously 11.10.2014

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Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 11/29/2014 4:33:00 PM

terrific use of space! Very creative!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/14/2014 3:07:00 PM

David, you are haiku royalty! What an exquisite piece! Love it! Pandita

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:56:00 PM

There is great power in the love-kiss -- handle with care! Your the best . . .

Trinity Biles

Date: 11/12/2014 11:58:00 AM

Aw. I love this, so sweet and creative. -TJ

David Meade
Date: 11/14/2014 8:56:00 PM

You are the sweetest . . . hugs and Love-Kisses!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/12/2014 9:12:00 AM

A great haiku. This "launch " is splendid!...LOVE xxxx rajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2014 3:43:00 PM

this one is very good. I love everything about it.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/10/2014 5:30:00 PM

excellent piece my friend

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 7:54:00 AM

Thank-you for stopping by -- from someone who knows that flares and loves need to be handled carefully -- they can burn deeply!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/10/2014 3:50:00 PM

Unique and creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 7:55:00 AM

You are very kind Ms. Sara -- may your day be filled with light and love.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/10/2014 2:18:00 PM

Dynamic haiku.

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 7:56:00 AM

Dynamic is a great description for the power of flares and love-kisses . . . be careful, they are explosive!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/10/2014 1:04:00 PM

Looks and reads beautifully. Great Greg. 7's your lucky number today because I also love what you did here.

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 8:04:00 AM

thank-you again for your email and feedback . . . much appreciated . . . all the very best my friend.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/10/2014 12:43:00 PM

Very unique and creative haiku in shape and topic, David! A 7 from me my dear friend :) love and light! xxxx D.

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 7:59:00 AM

Thank-you Ms. Potter -- since the English language is not as descriptive and symbolic as the Japanese Language, I tried to use the placement of the sentences and letters to help create a deeper meaning. Thank-you for referencing the shape -- your faithful reading of the haiku is much appreciated. . . light and love.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/10/2014 12:16:00 PM

WOW you launched yourself to a 7 from me with this stunning haiku! Hugs jan x

David Meade
Date: 11/11/2014 8:02:00 AM

The launching of flares and love-kisses are powerful events . . . as you well know . . . may your afternoon be filled with much love and tenderness, my sweet friend.