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Haiku 17: Fog Noise

fog -- deep, wet, THICK – h a n g s s-o-l-i-t-u-d-e abounds -- I long to hear your voice David Meade

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Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2015 8:42:00 AM

David, beautiful words and love the layout, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, thinking in . . .

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/3/2014 3:27:00 PM

Solitude can be a killer Dave.A deep thought penned!

David Meade
Date: 11/3/2014 4:59:00 PM

A starved heart can lead to entropy of our emotions! Thank-you for your visit.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2014 3:23:00 PM

another example of the sounds of silence!! Nice seeing more of you poetry today.

David Meade
Date: 11/3/2014 4:59:00 PM

or "Silence of the Lambs" I am very glad you stopped by!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/3/2014 10:26:00 AM

I get that foggy sometimes..Very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..(I mean mental fog)...Sara

David Meade
Date: 11/3/2014 5:05:00 PM

I usually go back to sleep when it's foggy -- safer that way!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/3/2014 8:20:00 AM

beautifully crafted piece david

David Meade
Date: 11/3/2014 5:07:00 PM

You are very kind Sir McDaid and I thank-you for your visit. I am a big fan of yours. All the best.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/3/2014 12:42:00 AM

Solitude's perfect image! Great, dear David!

David Meade
Date: 11/3/2014 5:07:00 PM

Knowing that we are never alone!! Thank-you my friend!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/2/2014 7:12:00 PM

Fog can feel other worldly when immersed in its shroud...disconnected from those we long for. Wonderfully conveyed in your poem David!

David Meade
Date: 11/2/2014 7:46:00 PM

Thank-you Connie, it is always more fun to be "shrouded" in the fog with someone you love.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/2/2014 5:45:00 PM

David, I think you captured the solitude reality exceedingly well with image essence of the "thick fog." I enjoyed your Haiku write here very much. A "7" too from me. Cheers, Gary