Haiku

drying up stream bed wet cracking sun heated stones deer lick minerals

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2020 7:49:00 AM

- A lovely haiku, Warren :) - Hope everything is fine with you ... I'm fine ... but the virus is flourishing like never before ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll
Date: 8/15/2020 3:04:00 PM

Hi Ann-Lise, I hope you remain fine. It's always great to hear from you. Glad you liked the haiku. Sending many hugs your way ~ Warren

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2020 3:24:00 PM

excellent imagery Warren, hope you are keeping well:-) hugs jan xx

Warren Doll
Date: 7/28/2020 12:55:00 PM

Hi Jan, thanks for your positive comments and visit. It's always good hearing from you. Keep well too. ~ Warren

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/17/2020 10:03:00 PM

Good, descriptive haiku, Warren. Janice

Warren Doll
Date: 7/6/2020 1:24:00 PM

Janice, thanks for your positive comment and visit ~Warren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2020 3:19:00 PM

Hi, Warren. I see you enjoy haiku writing as well. I bet the licking the deer do is really good for them!

Warren Doll
Date: 7/28/2020 12:59:00 PM

Yes, I do. For the deer a real treat. Thanks and all the best~ Warren

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/8/2020 4:24:00 PM

Sounds like home...Phoenix. I can feel the heat of your words. Today is cool...under 100:)

Warren Doll
Date: 6/15/2020 9:26:00 AM

Joe, thanks for your visit and comments. ~ Warren