Haiku 12-28-16

As to sleep I go In eternity I be Mind and Soul combine.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/29/2023 6:02:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

John Michaels

Date: 11/26/2023 5:05:00 AM

I love a good Haiku and this, my friend, is definitely up there. Amazing how so few, but oh-so-carefully selected, words can capture the essence of the eternal questions Man posits. If you feel so inclined, I humbly invite you to read my latest "Reflections..." postings as I feel we share a Haiku spirit. Have a great day. Regards, John.

Chris Green

Date: 12/28/2016 5:27:00 PM

Very cool. This felt good to read.