Haiku 114

Haiku 114 tonight in half-moon’s light I greeted autumn’s first northern breath at last

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2014 11:52:00 PM

wonderful fall haiku, jack. congrats for your win.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/28/2014 2:38:00 PM

Great Haiku! Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 12:59:00 PM

so beautifully penned many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/27/2014 9:55:00 AM

Jack, Congratulations on your top win, in my Autumn Night's contest. A blessing it is to be back. I love nothing more than a free feeling of falling leaves drifting away at night. Thank you for the supporting one of my many soup contest. Stop by my latest blog "Together Alone" if you'd like. No problem if you don't have time. Just take this time and enjoy your win... LOVE LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/11/2014 3:16:00 PM

Jack, I love the Northern air... Autumn, I love the sound... LINDA

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/7/2014 1:33:00 AM

What a beautiful piece this is! Excellent autumnal haiku! Pandita