Haiku 108

Haiku 108 we lie quietly... together in the sweet arms of winter’s darkness

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 3/5/2016 11:21:00 AM

Touching with tenderness.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/19/2014 9:48:00 AM

A hot and cold experience.

Donna Jones

Date: 2/12/2014 5:07:00 PM

Ahh lovely cup half full Jack....wonderful feeling after reading this..came to see what I've been missing?...had this crappy flu for weeks....but we are supposed to warm up now for a few days huh? Yeah! Great poem..

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/13/2014 6:27:00 PM

Thanks, Donna. I hope you feel better soon... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2014 6:34:00 PM

- So sweet and warm haiku, Jack! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 1/29/2014 9:13:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. A little warmth is most welcome... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/27/2014 9:52:00 PM

Turning the crux of winter into the incipience of spring. Fantastic.

Jack Jordan
Date: 2/13/2014 6:26:00 PM

Thanks, Drake. I always appreciatwe your comments... Jack

Michael Dom

Date: 1/27/2014 4:52:00 AM

Wow. I am liking this one, very.

Jack Jordan
Date: 1/27/2014 8:46:00 AM

Thank you, Michael... Jack