Haiku

Spring rains provide life roots reach for water - well fed mosquitoes breeding

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/15/2018 10:46:00 AM

This shows a darker side of Spring - what can happen when we get too much rain:-)! I enjoyed reading this excellently penned, great, witty haiku! It's already a winner! Hugs. Pandita

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/13/2018 12:06:00 AM

oh this is good! I really hate mosquitos! But I guess are necessary, to feed the bats? lol Nice Haiku!

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/13/2018 6:37:00 AM

Thanks! You are right, they are critter food, but what a pain they are.

Mike Hauser

Date: 7/12/2018 7:24:00 PM

Nice!

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/13/2018 6:35:00 AM

Thanks!

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/11/2018 10:35:00 PM

A beautiful haiku Casarah, with a superb second line. A compelling write. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/12/2018 3:27:00 PM

Thank you sweetie :)

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/11/2018 7:23:00 PM

Is there anything good about mosquito's? :) Life. Hmmmm, not all good eh'. :)

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/12/2018 3:27:00 PM

I have yet to find a reward for them little pest too lol

Tikar Osuru

Date: 7/11/2018 9:51:00 AM

Very true. I liked your spring haiku with its beautiful image.

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/12/2018 3:26:00 PM

Thank you!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/11/2018 9:20:00 AM

Yes, and they always over breed, dont they? Beautiful imagery here; thanks for the great read.

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/12/2018 3:26:00 PM

Yes they do! Way too much this year, but the flowers are also doing very well. The good and the bad of spring showers.

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/11/2018 8:53:00 AM

Interesting haiku ... The arrival of the second line is the right turn for the conclusion ... Thank you for liking my Dancing Hall haiku ...

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/12/2018 3:25:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by as well. Hugs