Get Your Premium Membership

Haiku

Haiku
Ocean waters deep Navy submarine hides out Cruise missiles ready

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/4/2018 6:58:00 AM
How true, how true dear, Oliver!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/8/2018 10:58:00 AM
a very perfect visual haiku, Oliver, well done.. good luck in the contest.. hugs
Login to Reply
Mckeithan Avatar
Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/8/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Eve. Glad you liked it. Oliver
Date: 5/8/2018 1:31:00 AM
Powerful hakiu Oliver, in this volatile world we have to be armed and ready. Tom
Login to Reply
Mckeithan Avatar
Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/8/2018 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Tom. It is unfortunate but necessary. Oliver

Book: Reflection on the Important Things