Haiku

cherry bloom timely reminder mum's birthday 01/02/2018

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/9/2018 11:55:00 AM

This is a beautiful haiku, Jean, the above pictures is so touching of you..I believe that she is watching every move you make. If, this poem is for a contest good luck. ...Hugs Eve

Jean Murray
Date: 5/9/2018 12:00:00 PM

Both poems you mention did not make the grade Eve. Still, that gave me licence then to add the photo above. I miss her strength behind me.

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/2/2018 8:36:00 PM

rotten lettuce//must clean out the fridge//something moved :) . Lovely little haiku, Jean. Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 5/3/2018 4:20:00 AM

Hello to my morning happy pill. x

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/2/2018 7:18:00 PM

Oh so beautiful, Jean, such a lovely way to remember.. Happy Birthday to your Mum :))

Jean Murray
Date: 5/3/2018 4:18:00 AM

If she were alive she would have been 90 yesterday Susan. She left us 8 years ago. An amazing woman, she was conferred a degree in Humanities at 70 years of age! She had to wait until all 7 of us were up and running before she could start.