Haiku

sun speckled small fry dart riotously around slow swaying sea kelp 18/04/2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/23/2018 10:07:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/24/2018 3:08:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Roy Pett

Date: 4/23/2018 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Jean with your great haiku. :))

Jean Murray
Date: 4/23/2018 3:34:00 PM

Good evening Roy. It's always a thrill. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2018 1:58:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 2st place in the haiku contest, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 4/23/2018 2:10:00 PM

It's a lovely feeling to get a placement . Thank you.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/23/2018 12:44:00 PM

A great haiku. Congratulations on your win.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/23/2018 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Susan.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2018 3:53:00 AM

- Excellent haiku, Jean :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 4/19/2018 4:08:00 AM

Good morning Anne-Lise. Thank you as always for your sunshine visits.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/19/2018 2:53:00 AM

Lovely image Jean, lovely day here,about time too. Good luck. Tom.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/19/2018 3:16:00 AM

Indeed Tom. At least the evenings are getting a good stretch. Thank you for your visit.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/18/2018 10:39:00 PM

Lovely contrast, Jean. Beautiful haiku.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/19/2018 3:16:00 AM

That's lovely to hear from you who knows them so well Line. Thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/18/2018 4:02:00 PM

lovely imagery Jean:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 4/18/2018 4:08:00 PM

Hi Jan. Heat wave hit you yet? Very windy here today. Instead of stripping off we are battening down the hatches. Thank you as always for your lovely visits.