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Growing Old

GROWING OLD The pangs of age begin to tell How quickly infirmity may come Bringing poor health to some While many seem to do so well But all is not lost if one but look At the joy they shared along the way As time was passing by day after day And the less appealing things forsook There are hobbies that one might pursue Ballroom dancing, painting, or skating Can prove to be rather invigorating There are so many things to learn to do The pleasure of a stroll in the park Meeting strangers who became a friend Bringing meaning to life 'til the end And comfort when life seemed dark Growing old has merit mingled with strife But when it all is shared with another With friends who were as close as a brother You will find you have had a productive life 16 February 2019 For the contest Enclosed Rhyme Poetry sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 1/20/2020 10:38:00 PM
Yeah so right. Beautiful, so pithy poem. Thank you for sharing this poem. Best regards.
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Date: 3/6/2019 6:53:00 AM
I have read your enclosed rhyme work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 3/6/2019 1:06:00 AM
Very touching! I enjoyed every single word of every single line. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/5/2019 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations Curtis! Your poem has placed "Third" in my PoetrySoup contest. Due to the exacting rhyme requirements of this form, this contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/16/2019 7:24:00 AM
Emile, please accept this "after-the-fact" response as a grateful and resounding "thank you". Thank you for the contest, the placement, and the great book I received already. God Bless you and the pleasure you give others in your exquisite writing.
Date: 2/16/2019 9:48:00 AM
Very nice Curtis! Well written :)
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 2/16/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi! Your comments are always welcome. I appreciate your support.
Date: 2/16/2019 9:34:00 AM
Nice rhymes Curtis.. Sharing is always so much better..
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 3/16/2019 7:22:00 AM
S O, I don't know how I missed responding to your comment. You are absolutely right, sharing is so much better.
Date: 2/16/2019 8:34:00 AM
Getting out and enjoying life does keep people feeling younger, Curtis. At age 93, my father still played in a band, walked six miles per day and traveled abroad. Dad was a happy fella and you offer some great advice in your poem. Best wishes for a win!
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 2/16/2019 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn! I admire men like your Dad who refuse to 'grow old'. Growing old is for those who view life in a negative manner. Your Dad had the right attitude. I will be 76 as of the upcoming St. Patrick's Day and I dare not slow down. Thanks again for your response.

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