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Groovy Hippy Girl

She is a groovy, hippy girl. She loves that funky, trippy beat. It is her hippy, trippy world! She is a groovy, hippy girl. She dances funky, hippy twirls, and when she sits, she taps her feet. She is a groovy, hippy girl. She loves that funky, trippy beat. 1/12/2022

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/1/2022 12:37:00 PM

Congrats, PS. This is a Fav Brings back memories of the Summer of Love, San Francisco 1967....))) Great rhyme and talent?understatement...!! Wonderful to see rhyme in use. Not avoided.,,,,,,I am ku’d out, Pangie

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/8/2022 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun/wonderful Triolet write. You have the beat as you write away. Have a blessed day..........

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/1/2022 9:42:00 AM

ty :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/8/2022 3:53:00 AM

Great description of the hippy girl. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 4/1/2022 9:42:00 AM

ty :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/10/2022 6:24:00 AM

Uplifting, with a smile. It flows with great rhythm. Really enjoyed it, P. S.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 3/1/2022 7:15:00 PM

Hi Sandra! thank you so much :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/18/2022 7:24:00 PM

I like it a lot P.S. Great write. If you get a chance read my poem "1969" I think it relates.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/19/2022 7:57:00 AM

I have just hopped over to your poem and really enjoyed it! Thank you for directing me there. I am so glad you liked this one :) ~ps

Judy Ball

Date: 1/15/2022 3:42:00 PM

Too Cute P.S. Really good rhythm and rhyme. Very upbeat. Love it. God Bless, JB PS They sell Palmetto Hearts in some stores. Same thing. I saw them at WalMart here in Airdrie, Alberta.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/15/2022 3:43:00 PM

Hi Judy, I'm glad you liked the poem. I will have to look into the Palmetto hearts :) ~ps

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/15/2022 2:38:00 PM

Aw, so cute! Love this! This is so Far Out man, you are so totally groovy Andrea! <3 Be blessed today! <3

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 1/16/2022 1:22:00 AM

Oh, oops! Lol! That is a high compliment indeed, but still, I can't believe I did that! Well, you are totally groovy Awtry, and so is Andrea :) <3 I wonder if I should delete my first comment, and then it will be out-a-sight, I am so embarrassed. But anyway, I love your poem! :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/15/2022 3:09:00 PM

Thank you BJ—Glad you liked this one. (Sorry I’m not Andrea, but what a compliment!) ~ PS Awtry

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/15/2022 10:29:00 AM

Oh what a fun poem to be led to today! I really enjoy it :)

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/15/2022 10:33:00 AM

Oh, good! Thank you Heidi. I had so much fun writing this one :) ~ps

Valsa George

Date: 1/14/2022 12:37:00 AM

Love the rhythm of her trippy beat ! Great entry dear friend ! Best of Luck

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/14/2022 7:12:00 AM

Thank you Valsa! :) ~ps

Wren Rushing

Date: 1/13/2022 6:26:00 PM

I really like this poem! It reads like a song, a hippy, trippy song! Paulette reminds me of my sister! Good luck in the contest!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/13/2022 7:11:00 PM

Oh, good! Glad you liked it! And thanks for the luck!

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/13/2022 4:07:00 PM

Triplet, all right! Like it. Delightful, feet tapping, jiving beat. One can't help but read this, and then want to put on some Oldies But Goodies dancing music. Great write, P.S.!

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/13/2022 5:40:00 PM

Thank you Joe for the read and the comment! Have a great evening with those “old records off the shelf”! -ps

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 1/13/2022 1:28:00 PM

The funky rhythmic beat and images make this a perfect example of a triplet. Well done P.S.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/13/2022 1:32:00 PM

Oh, thank you Geoffrey! I was so happy writing this one. I sang this all day! ~ps

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2022 6:06:00 PM

Ha, ha! Far out! Like Wow! Outasight! Seriously, this is a barrel of monkeys. Pure enjoyment. :) gw

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/12/2022 6:09:00 PM

Oh, I am so glad you liked it! I felt like I had cracked the triolet code, writing this one. I am absurdly pleased with it! :D----ps

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/12/2022 11:09:00 AM

Hello P.S. Awtry, I like the rhythm of this poem. Good luck in the contest. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2022 8:52:00 AM

Hello P.S. Awtry, Yes I enjoyed this poem I will . You enjoy your day to my friend. Blessings.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/12/2022 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Darlene I am glad you liked it! Hope you have a beautiful day today! :) ~ps

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2022 9:44:00 AM

Hi PS, I enjoyed the flow and rhythm of your “ upbeat” write. Best wishes in the contest. I appreciate you coming to my page with your condolences. Have a nice day-Alexis

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/12/2022 10:57:00 AM

Thank you Alexis. I hope you are having a good day. :) ~ps

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/12/2022 9:13:00 AM

Lovely beat to your poem, PS. Charming write.

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/12/2022 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :) ~ps

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/12/2022 8:21:00 AM

P.S., Tapping my foot too, so love this poem's trippy beat. -Richard

P.S. Awtry
Date: 1/12/2022 8:23:00 AM

Oh Good! I was tapping mine--but wanted to know if anybody else heard it, too! Thank you, Richard! :) ~ps