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Grey Geese

Greyish geese gabbling Goslings greedily gouging Gardens green grass gone

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Robert Johnson

Date: 2/14/2014 11:09:00 AM

A goose and a gander will surely meander and drop all their blessings around. So when your among them, remember to ahem. keep your eyes glued firm to the ground. :) Peace. :)

Robert Johnson
Date: 2/14/2014 2:42:00 PM

I meant their little presents they leave on the sidewalk by the lake. Not sure you got that, Don't step in it. Peace. :)

Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/14/2014 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Robert this was my attempt at a Japanese Haiku with alliteration. Thank you will keep my eyes open for a change.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/11/2014 7:01:00 AM

Poly kalo Haiku Robert! I hope you will keep practicing your Greek, koubaros! Kudos!

Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 1/11/2014 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind words. Wish i could still speak it fluently. Love Yiannis Parios and Mikis Theodorakis especially East Berlin 1987 Strosse to stroma sou yia thio i think the bousouki playing was out of this world. I feel it in my blood. We have the Pathos.Thank you for reviewing my Poem