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Gray Butterflies

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(“Rain on Pavement at Night,” Image courtesy of flickr.com)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ pavement rain nighttime gray butterflies of light

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/27/2024 9:31:00 PM

So apropos. Really, you have presented a perfect picture here, Sara. This is special; a FAVE for me. Thanks, Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/28/2024 4:21:00 AM

thank you, Gershon, for your complimentary words and for your FAVE. I'm humbly grateful...wishing you a pleasant Sunday, Sara

Deb M

Date: 4/27/2024 3:02:00 PM

Beautiful in its simplicity Sara…..lovely! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 3:03:00 PM

thank you, Deb, for your sweet comments. Grateful for your visit & good to see you! Have a blessed evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/27/2024 1:32:00 PM

imagery is everything! have a pleasant evening!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 2:38:00 PM

I agree, Kim. Appreciate you and your enthusiastic comments. Have a splendid weekend, hugs & blessings, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2024 1:00:00 PM

- Linguistic creativity ... gives the reader the experience of seeing, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 2:38:00 PM

aww, thank you Anne-Lise! I appreciate your complimentary words as well as your visit today. Wishing you a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/27/2024 4:38:00 AM

How wonderful! God gives us the rain, and the eyes and mind to translate -- what gift of treasures awaiting our open-to. Short but potent read. Not the amount of words, but the world of thought with feelings that goes into them.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 5:16:00 AM

wow, thank you Joe for your powerful and insightful words. I'm grateful for your sharing your thoughts and for commenting. Have a lovely day, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2024 3:40:00 AM

Very imaginative work here. Way to go. thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 5:15:00 AM

Thanks, Sara K, for stopping by. I appreciate your positive and kind words. Have a great day, hugs, Sara B

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 4/26/2024 9:09:00 PM

I am not here as much as I would like, this poem is a gem, Aysha

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 5:15:00 AM

Thank you, Aysha, for taking the time to drop by and to comment. I understand about time being a factor...but am grateful, therefore, for your visit. Have a splendid day, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 4/26/2024 7:30:00 PM

So, so beautiful- love this image

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 5:14:00 AM

thank you, Paige. Grateful for your visit and kind remarks. Wishing you a wonderful day, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/26/2024 6:53:00 PM

when the heart is hopeful and at peace it can see most anything in the rain, even butterflies, loved it Sara, :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/27/2024 5:13:00 AM

aww, thank you for your gracious and kind words. I appreciate you and your visit. Have a splendid Saturday, dear Rose, hugs, Sara