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Graveyard Diggers- a Frustrated Quest

LETS NOT CRY FOR THOSE WHO ARE DEAD AS EMOTIONS ARE BURIED IN THE GRAVEYARD LONGING FOR LOVE IS FUTILE PALE AND FRAGILE I WISH THOSE BLUE EYES TO BE MINE FOREVER ALAS ! DREAMS ARE THE ENEMIES OF DAYLIGHT MOONLIGHT IS CONCEALING MY THOUGHTS INSOMNIA IS GRIPPING MY VISION WAYWARD THOUGHTS CULMINATES AS MY LOVE POEMS ARE CHAINED IN PRISON… Redfiery 2011

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/13/2013 7:46:00 AM

Nick made a good suggestion although I feel it feels like one poem and two stanzas.

Red Fiery
Date: 8/13/2013 8:35:00 AM

I was very frustrated while writing this one...I still remember. ..

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/12/2012 8:04:00 PM

I know the meaning of the last line.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2012 5:09:00 AM

An interesting and emotional poem, I kind of felt it was two poems run into one, could have easily split it after line 6, enjoyed the read.

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 1/1/2012 8:06:00 AM

Bravo! Here's hoping that this year sees you find the person with the keys to unlock your prison, so both can live through an eternal night of sweet dreams.

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/31/2011 9:27:00 AM

loved it.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/31/2011 7:20:00 AM

What a wonderful poem this is, Dreams are the enemy of daylight. wow just blows one away. Oh, by the way, i was a grave digger at the age of 15, not many poets can admit to that. Have yourself a wonderful New Year. harry

David Williams

Date: 12/30/2011 3:14:00 AM

Red I like this, but let your inner love poems be unchained..David

M.I.A .

Date: 12/29/2011 8:30:00 PM

evoking emotions you presented here Red. pretty profound stuff. wishing you a great happy new year to come