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This poem was written after the earthquake in Haiti when a video crew was captured on film taking pictures of a hand waving from beneath the rubble. They chose to take a picture instead of grab a shovel in an attempt to save him. 
As the dust settles in our hearts hands are left reaching, grasping, pleading from the concrete tombs that enclose our lives. We are pressed down by the burdens of living, unable to heal our wounded souls. We are losing our battle… hoping, praying, for someone, somewhere to free us from the rubble of ourselves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/20/2013 9:41:00 PM
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