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Grand Old Oak Tree

What tales your leaves must whisper of youths tall in your strong arms. Pretending to be pirates in a terrible, fierce storm. Or lovers in your shadows making vows they sometimes kept; dreamer's secret hideaway, underneath leaves, young boys slept. Many years honed your boldness, growing taller, stronger, blest. You were proud to play sentry standing guard so birds could nest. You were the featured player in those years of grandeur past. Years have now turned against you and have burdened you at last. Growing older with seasons, branches balding, and falling. You stand proud as you listen to echoes and their calling. My good friend, grand old oak tree I will sit with you at last We'll tell each other stories of those days that have long passed. April, 2020 for Wisdom from Trees Poetry Contest by Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 2/23/2022 5:24:00 AM
very nice, we have a lot of big oaks in our woods, and I wonder too at all thing things they have seen
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/14/2022 9:18:00 AM
Thanks, Jeff. You're so lucky to have woods!
Date: 1/31/2022 9:14:00 AM
I have read a number of your poems and I must say I appreciate the way you express profound depth in seeming simplicity. Grand old oak tree is one of those I like best. I believe this is a very good poem which renews our innate attachment to nature. Keep up the good work.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/14/2022 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joyce! Your kind words have helped my confidence a lot! :)
Date: 10/12/2021 8:08:00 AM
What a beautiful poem. If only the old oak tree could talk. I love poems about trees and marking this poem as one of my favs.
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/12/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Franci! i love this old oak. A family of mocking birds grew in it this past summer. It still stands proudly, missing limbs.
Date: 4/7/2021 12:39:00 AM
What a wonderful tree is the oak. Loved your poem.
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/12/2021 8:33:00 PM
Yes, it is wonderful. Thank you for your comments, Victor!
Date: 4/6/2021 6:58:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. I smiled as I read each line and I could see those lovers and young boys under your beautiful Grand Old Oak tree. A fav for me :-)
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/27/2021 9:01:00 AM
Thank you, Anne! And thank you for commenting on so many of my poems. Makes my heart sing :)
Date: 3/30/2021 7:29:00 PM
What an amazing poem this is Ann. As you know i too love the oak. and this just has to be a favourite for me...
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/12/2021 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Harry. Your tree about the oak is beautiful.
Date: 3/30/2021 6:09:00 PM
Your poem flows so smoothly and tells such a sweet tale. I enjoyed reading your poem, Ann! Blessings, Kim M
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/4/2021 11:21:00 AM
Thank you, dear Kim. I love my oak tree. In the desert of New Mexico, we take our trees seriously :)
Date: 3/30/2021 4:27:00 PM
Hi Ann, this is so lovely, and as I too am getting older I can relate, the tender nostalgia and longing so sweet and soothing, I can picture it - am making it a Fave!
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/31/2021 9:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michelle! It's my favorite tree and it is slowly dying. So very sad. Your poetry is lovely--the best!

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