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Gotta love - reversible poem

Love’s journey, joy and tears, Guided by grace through all the years. Gotta love, in every guise, Each chapter cherished, beneath the skies. True love with God, tranquil and pure, Promises eternal, pristine and sure. Divine devotion, a destined delight, Faithful forever, in the Father's light. Memories murmur, melancholy in pairs. Gone is the glow, a grievous gap glares, Whispered words weep, wounds within deep. Separation's sorrow, shadows silently sweep. Tender touches, time transcends too soon. She sings softly, serenades under the moon, Laughter lingers long, lovely in twilight. Living with love, life's luminous light. Heartbeats hasten, hopes held high, hues of blue. In anticipation, ardor awakens anew, Gotta love the glowing gaze, a girl's gentle bloom. Glimpses of grace in the gathering gloom.

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Silent One

Date: 5/25/2024 1:51:00 AM

Very nice

Deb M

Date: 5/23/2024 12:23:00 PM

Just lovely Jay! So pleased you got POTD….belated Congratulations! Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/22/2024 8:31:00 PM

Lovely! Congratulations on POTD!

David Crandall

Date: 5/22/2024 6:26:00 PM

Congratulations Jay! Beautiful poem, and it's my introduction to the idea of "reversible poem" - fascinating!

Karen Jones

Date: 5/22/2024 5:57:00 PM

So sensual and beautiful with magical alliteration! Well done! Congratulations on your potd honor!

Bill Baker

Date: 5/22/2024 5:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine POTD, Jay! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/22/2024 2:14:00 PM

' True love with God, tranquil and pure, promises eternal; pristine and sure. ' Very comforting, indeed. Your words are beautiful, tender, romantic and spiritual, all at the same time. A challenge creating a reversible poem, as I have done so before. Overall, it's a fun experience. Well done, Jay. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Irene Hammer

Date: 5/22/2024 1:02:00 PM

This is cool! Backwards and forwards and all around. Lovely alliteration.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/22/2024 10:57:00 AM

Hello Jay Narain, Congratulations on your POTD. A beautiful poem you created. Enjoy your special day. /Darlene/ /D

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/22/2024 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day with your win...............

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/22/2024 8:27:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Jay Narain! So many lines filled with alliteration that have impact, are fabulous! I especially loved "True love with God, tranquil and pure, Promises eternal, pristine and sure Divine devotion, a destined delight, Faithful forever, in the Father's light" Blessings. Enjoy your day :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/22/2024 6:57:00 AM

Solid rhymes and alliteration bring this gentle poem great dimension Jay. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/22/2024 6:53:00 AM

Hello Jay, your poem is a masterpiece of emotion and artistry, deserving of every accolade it receives. Your skillful crafting of words brings love's complexities to life, from its tender beginnings to its bittersweet farewells. Your work is a testament to the power of poetry to capture the essence of human experience. Congratulations on being recognized for your talent with POTD! - Blessings, Daniel

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/22/2024 5:51:00 AM

WOW! Kudos to you! I have rarely read such a flowing, emotional, spiritual, brilliant alliteration smoothly presented! Now you are inspiring me to try one! "Whispered words weep, wounds within deep" "Heartbeats hasten, hopes held high, hues of blue" - these, and so many complete lines of alliteration along with the depth of the theme, amazed me. Thank you, Jay, for creating such a masterpiece. It's a beauty! Adding to FAVES. Congratulations!

Christina Bowring

Date: 5/22/2024 4:51:00 AM

Dear Jay, many congratulations for POTD with this truly beautiful, exquisite poem. It’s so well crafted and expressive, ‘ Each chapter cherished, beneath the skies’ ‘ Separation’s sorrow, shadows silently sweep’’ glimpses of grace in the gathering gloom’ Wonderful lines. Brilliant alliteration that flows so well. Really enjoyed it. Have a great celebratory day. Blessings to you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/22/2024 3:56:00 AM

BIG congrats Jay, on POTD. Love reverberates throughout. Enjoy your special day.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/22/2024 3:22:00 AM

Jay, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 5/22/2024 2:47:00 AM

Dear Jay, Congratulations on this well penned POTD. It whimsically dances so well with alliteration, a joy to read!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/22/2024 2:43:00 AM

returning to wish you hearty congrats on your well-deserved POTD designation!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/22/2024 2:41:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD. a deserving poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/22/2024 2:20:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Jay :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/22/2024 1:48:00 AM

What a sublime write, inspired by angels! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Jay

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/22/2024 1:23:00 AM

Congrats on POTD. God bless you with love, Gina

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/22/2024 12:42:00 AM

Wonderful poetry Jay, beautifully written, great alliteration. I love how it can be read top to bottom and bottom to top. Congratulations on a well deserved award for poem of the day… Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/21/2024 4:20:00 PM

One of the most beautiful poems I've read in quite some time! The grace with which you use alliteration and rhyme makes for such an appealing read. Then on top of that you 'reversed' your poem. Impressive! This poem is a true romance poem! I loved it! Faving it, too. Have a great evening, Sara