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I need to write a poem today One that will blow your mind away It must be wild and serene But that won't fit into this scene It must be active, visual too Like something I'd do at the zoo Maybe, I'll pretend I've got the flu But that won't work you'd stay away too Oh my, There's stars, clouds and mountains tall Oceans or grass to catch your fall But then, how do I get up high Now that I've got your attention, I'll fly Now that you are here with me I'll zoom and soar and miss that tree But if I don't what will WE do Now I've got you thinking too Thank goodness now that you came My whole concept was to entertain Now is the time to confess or admit It's your turn cause, I'm getting air sick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/12/2010 4:26:00 PM
Interesting write...Sometimes we just have a hard time trying to decide a topic of interest on which to write...Sara
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Date: 7/12/2010 1:32:00 PM
Enjoyed this write today. Please check out my latest criminals part 3 when you have time.. ofcourse the story isn't true. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/8/2010 6:33:00 AM
This was a very fun, cute piece. I enjoyed reading this. It flowed well.
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Date: 7/8/2010 4:38:00 AM
Thanks for the smiles :) I so needed this, God bless you Cile, Love Wilma
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Date: 7/7/2010 8:36:00 PM
excellet poem, with a sense of humour too! love it Harry
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:41:00 PM
What a pick me upper of a poem, absolutely fabulous. You are such a warm - hearted person. Thanks for the smile. Ron
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Date: 7/7/2010 4:38:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Nice use of rhyme. It was so good to see your name in my inbox. I've missed you and your humor. Keep your poems coming. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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