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Goodnight:

I remember long ago when your voice always answered the phone It was always quite clear just how you felt just by the tone And so long ago i am not sure if I would ever have known Just how quiet it got and how it became to be not one of your own It was our first Christmas day together I remember you most All the sparkles in your eyes, the lights, and candle lit posts I get lost in myself when I remember, and think of that now all alone As the sparkles and the old flames fade away like unwanted ghosts It seemed like yesterday everything was brand new and felt right And not long ago it was you, that I held, and loved thru the night Now everything has become so cold and dull never too bright Since the last time I heard your voice on the phone, saying goodnight

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Date: 10/12/2014 10:32:00 AM
lovely, moving piece, I can relate to this so well, nicely written, gets a 7 from me :)
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 10/12/2014 11:02:00 AM
that is so nice, that gives me a lot of inspiration to keep trying, and i don't feel any one here should get a 1, after all it is not easy pouring your heart out and writing it on a wall
Date: 9/17/2014 12:09:00 PM
thank you for your kind remarks Rajat
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Date: 9/17/2014 8:59:00 AM
"old flames fade away with unwanted ghosts" memorable line.Words are your oyster. Loved it very very much. You inspired me. Thanks. LOVE.
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