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silenced may be the words of she yet through the echoes of minds she walks with the weave of thoughts you let her in where shadows of night behold her beauty she'll wind down paths you may not like make no sense in the suspense of these or the whereas darkness plagues like lightless night yet you listen to what she sternly speaks of until tears rain from a mind that's cloudless and emotions peak like blades in spring's climes your mind, it bleeds like morning rise and your eyes, now opened wide, appear less starry then these clouded overhead darkened skies your mind less blank, your paper now full, and your muse herself ... she spilled it all ruthless, relentless, that's emotionless at best you shiver at what she speaks of in the depths of thoughts so dark yet you awake from her grasp and see a clouded mind more bright! She walks in beauty, like the night Of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all that’s best of dark and bright Lord Byron – She Walks in Beauty

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Date: 10/4/2023 12:17:00 PM
This is a wonderful write Sandy, congrats on a well deserved win, I knew Craig would rate this high as do I.
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Date: 10/3/2023 10:22:00 PM
Great to see you're writing again, Sandra! I love your romantic style. Congrats!
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Date: 10/3/2023 10:02:00 PM
A beautiful interpretation of the brief, Sandra. Loved every line :) Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/3/2023 6:59:00 PM
This is how thoughts (if I may steal yours) are woven...I've missed yours Sandy - magical!
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Date: 10/3/2023 2:47:00 PM
Beautiful - congratulations on your trophy win
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Date: 9/17/2023 5:05:00 AM
So great to see you back! This a deep and emotive take on the contest.. Really liked this stanza: you shiver at what she speaks of in the depths of thoughts so dark yet you awake from her grasp and see a clouded mind more bright! Great personification! Look forward to reading more of your poems.
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Date: 9/16/2023 10:17:00 PM
Oh Sandra, how glad to see you back. I missed your special poetry. Your ideas rumble on with great imagery. Best for a win. Blessings.
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Date: 9/16/2023 7:24:00 PM
Welcome back, Sandra:-) Such a great write. I enjoyed reading.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/16/2023 8:14:00 PM
thank you my friend... this was a tough contest to write for, especially with a muse that's been absent! Your words are encouraging! hugs

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