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"You're only supposed to blow the bloody doors off!" - Charlie Croker, The Italian Job

A Jinjagoliath poem: 26th May 2023
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You're in my head It's true. You're there. I led you in Showed you a chair We sat to talk I made a brew I shared my thoughts You shared a few And in the chat I do recall Bricks were removed From in the wall That separates The love departed From reality Of broken hearted As knees I slap Well that's it, I guess There's nothing left Now to confess A heart to heart Was just the job. My vault of gold.. After the rob But pausing for a sec I wait Just not the type Who chooses hate Blue lights and red Have led the chase As speeding hearts Have lies to face It hurts to hear the truth It's true But gold there is And it's still you

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Date: 5/26/2023 10:12:00 PM
This is a nice one Chris, I enjoyed reading it
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 2/27/2024 6:47:00 PM
Thank you DD, I realLy appreciate your visit
Date: 5/26/2023 6:04:00 AM
Enjoyed this poem Christopher….Debx
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 2/27/2024 6:46:00 PM
Well that is lovely to hear Deb, thank you :)

Book: Shattered Sighs