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God's only son

Charred in solace of your embrace reminiscences engrossed as imprint harboured in placards of your grace A birth, a thousand with no squint in winter's pure pour of snow reminiscences engrossed as imprint Giggling with nights glow in waxes and treelights in winter's pure pour of snow One who ignites in delights grining in fire and refuge in waxes and treelights A festivity of tunes and rouge that twirls in vitality grining in fire and refuge Presents reciprocated in sib purity charred in solace of your embrace that twirls in vitality harboured in placards of your grace

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Sam Scott

Date: 4/8/2024 8:41:00 PM

Late to the party.. but this oozes Christmas and I love the "A festivity of tunes and rouge that twirls in vitality.." lines. Look forward to more :) Sam

Tonye George
Date: 4/11/2024 9:49:00 AM

Hey Sam. There's always a cup for you whenever you visit. The music is always on. Thank you for visiting.

Valsa George

Date: 12/31/2023 7:45:00 AM

Very ingeniously done. Great rhyming too. For me terzanelle is a difficult form. But you have handled it in a unique way. A great entry for the contest. All the best dear Tonye !

Tonye George
Date: 12/31/2023 5:07:00 PM

Thank you Valsa. Happy new year to you

Stephan McBride

Date: 12/30/2023 8:09:00 AM

Love it, so very well put together, beautiful gift you have in writing , One who ignites in delights , love it, : ) for He brought the spirit of fire to place within us to consume and purify us unto a family unto the Living God

Tonye George
Date: 12/31/2023 5:13:00 PM

Thank you Stephan, a happy new year to you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2023 1:42:00 PM

Without His grace we would be nothing. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Tonye George
Date: 12/31/2023 5:12:00 PM

Indeed we are nothing without his grace, I hope your new year is filled with favour and happiness.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/22/2023 9:40:00 PM

A challenging form to share your thoughts through, Tonye, but you did well, and this is a good entry for the contest. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Tonye George
Date: 12/31/2023 5:11:00 PM

Thank you friend, a happy new and marvelous year to you and your family Bill.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/18/2023 2:53:00 AM

Oh wow, this is quite an intriguing form which I've been thinking to try too, but you've actually nailed it! Quite a profound take for the contest and that too, you've carved this so beautifully.. An aura of merry can be felt here yet with a sense of evocative depth.. Wonderfully done! :)

Tonye George
Date: 12/18/2023 8:39:00 AM

Thank you for your support and great insight Hiya, you should try it, Merry Christmas.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 12/17/2023 5:43:00 PM

nicely expressed, bold language play, creative, thoughtful

Tonye George
Date: 12/18/2023 8:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Mat, appreciate your comment.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/17/2023 3:21:00 PM

You've captured the essence of the Christmas holiday and the man for whom we celebrate. I'm not familiar with this form of poetry but I can see possibilities. You inspired me. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Tonye George
Date: 12/17/2023 5:24:00 PM

Thank you Sara. That was my first try too and I'm glad you liked it.

Silent One

Date: 12/17/2023 10:53:00 AM

You did this form so well and this is a very different entry I have seen for the contest.. You have expressed it really well with great rhymes..

Tonye George
Date: 12/17/2023 12:38:00 PM

Yay! Thank you silent one. Happy Sunday.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/17/2023 9:54:00 AM

You're mega talented Tonye. While I don't associate the tradition of Xmas with the birth of the Christ as many do, I nevertheless embrace the import of his coming into the world

Tom Woody
Date: 12/17/2023 10:19:00 AM

Yes'm

Tonye George
Date: 12/17/2023 10:06:00 AM

Yes I remember you said that in one piece I read. The most significant thing is truly his impact and how it affects you and how you live with it and by it. You good. Thank you for your support woody.