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Gleam of Hope

When I look into your eyes I see the shadow of the moon cascading with all our dreams of tommorow      I see a glow that no other can contest   a gleam of hope dangling thru my night   delivering me peace   of mind   lying amongst your brilliance       when those diamonds crest   and the glimmer streaks are smooth   I'll be hanging out   wishing upon your star   waiting for your heart     to stop then soothe   my appreciation       holding you real close     in an ever entwining   midnight dance enticing   symphonic seductive tune

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Date: 8/28/2018 7:53:00 AM
I am in love with your poem Tim.It seems Hope brings out the best of your heartbeats through each line.
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Date: 8/26/2018 5:58:00 PM
:) You have been wishing on my star? This is beautiful, dreamy and romantic. In dreams, anything is possible. ~ Brandy
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Date: 8/25/2018 1:48:00 AM
If one is to lose everything, let it be everything but hope, so well written! I will even say "lovely" and hope that one day narrow minds, will seek love, not silent condemnation!!
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Date: 8/24/2018 3:54:00 PM
Beautifully written Tim. Keep on writing this outstanding poetry :)
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Date: 8/24/2018 2:38:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Tim! You're such a romantic soul.
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