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Gimbaled Time

I stand Rocking back and forth Bending memories heal my wounds Lost in winds that blow unseen Grasping truth from drowning seas Alone 11/07/15 3:50am

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Date: 9/30/2021 1:27:00 AM
Imaginative last couplet Jim
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/30/2021 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Brian!
Date: 1/22/2021 3:14:00 PM
Beautiful Jim. Hope you're still okay :)
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Date: 7/4/2016 10:11:00 AM
The imagery is wonderfully written and does the subject proud.
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:14:00 AM
A lovely page with mind blowing lines. This is wonderful dear friend. Weldon and thank you for yet another excellent share
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:29:00 PM
A splendid CINQUAIN! Keep up the good writing... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/20/2015 6:56:00 PM
You ARE a BEAUTIFUL MAN POET JAMES, stopped by to enjoy some of my favorite and best poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:11:00 PM
this some great itty bitty poetry, James. Sure enjoyed it!
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:47:00 AM
jimbo!...i got caught in your web of longing reveries...sentimentally embraced!..huggs
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