Gifts

Each year Christmas morn is magic All the wrapped gifts neath the tree Soon the paper will be scattered In our haste inside to see Excitedly we view the contents About how much we love them rave But in my heart my very favorites Will always be the gifts I gave Christmas 2011

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 1/12/2012 5:28:00 PM

Love the ending phrase, it captures the whole meaning in this write! Very nice!

Bob Quigley
Date: 1/12/2012 10:59:00 PM

Thank you Sue

Nick Bagnall

Date: 1/11/2012 6:39:00 AM

I agree other peoples smiles are one of the best gifts going.

Bob Quigley
Date: 1/11/2012 7:49:00 AM

Amen to that Nick

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 1/11/2012 4:46:00 AM

Many thanks, Bob. :)

Bob Quigley
Date: 1/11/2012 7:57:00 AM

You are welcome

Dinda Minardi

Date: 12/25/2011 11:10:00 PM

You only give the best! Simple poem that shows a lot of love and christmas spirit. Merry Christmas. :)

Bob Quigley
Date: 12/26/2011 8:58:00 AM

Thank you and Merry Christmas to you also.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/25/2011 4:38:00 PM

this is very sweet and lovely!

Bob Quigley
Date: 12/25/2011 5:13:00 PM

Thanks Ilene. Hope you read my new poem Heart of the City. I treated it a little kinder then my poem The City. Had you in mind when I wrote it. Merry Christmas

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2011 3:33:00 PM

A year for the next time Bob! OXOX hugs Anne-Lise

Bob Quigley
Date: 12/25/2011 5:15:00 PM

Hopes for a happy new year. Look forward to reading more of your poems in the future