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The reference to "rosebud" is my niece Roselyn (we call her rosebud as a nickname).

I've lived in Idaho before they turned our state sideways to resemble a gun Seen lively conversation stop midsentence aftering catching a glimpse Of the sun Yeah and some may say we got rivers, but they're dead wrong. These are God's Tears And He still hasn't forgotten How beautiful it is here. Or perhaps it's something more, and it's just His way of saying I'm gonna miss you. One last parting gift before saying farewell to the edge of the world. Maybe it's a free-fall into insanity Or a flower becoming unfurled Cause who would have known I'd ever be leaving ... not across the street ... but to Timbuktu And for those who have been so inclined to keep track of me I'm sure y'all know That I've got Georgia on my mind. I'm told they got red clay and mud lakes with river names that are a mouthful Or maybe it was the humidity But to me the only thing that's green is the okra and them fried 'maters (my envy surely isn't) They tell me that I live in the City of Trees, currently, but honey We got the entire eastern side of the New World Or perhaps it was all a practical joke and I'm REALLY moving to Jamaica ... with the amount of limbo that's been going on in my heart Maybe our landlord secretly takes pleasure in watching lives fall apart. (or maybe she's an angel in disguise telling me that the time is come for a change) It's all so strange And in any case It's happening regardless Whether Life's Tragedy Or God's Comedy Soon my domain will be reduced to that of a Cardboard Castle: No king, no queen ...... but I hear they got a jester; and if we're lucky, we can invite him over for kicks and giggles when it all becomes a Yardsaler's Utopia. Heck. Maybe I can convince those suckers that our lemonade is actually liquid gold and we can raise enough money to get out of dodge. (maybe my mind would be clearer if when I looked in the mirror I didn't see such a God forsaken hodge-podge) Perhaps it'll all work out or it will all go south (figuratively? literally? I forget which) But then my spiel ceases Thinking of my nieces Whom the last time I saw Left me in pieces I've got one Madelyn Amelia who just discovered the moon. Her sister too, a rosebud, but still in bloom. Can I chase them to edge of the field and twirl 'em around like a sack of potatoes? Or just get teary-eyed in brief remembrance of my life here in Idaho. Can I wrap 'em in my arms forever as they go Merry-Go-Rounds around my heart? Or will it be like it was before, see ya sometime maybe never Yeah for those that have been so inclined to keep track of me I'm sure y'all know That I've got Georgia on my mind ... but do they sell midnight tickets, that go sailing off to the light of dawn? ... or just go careening off the edge of the earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/28/2016 6:40:00 AM
This tells me, there's got to be a reason. And there surely is a reason for everything. "These are God's Tears And He still hasn't forgotten, how beautiful it is here." Nice, powerful words..and those ending lines are just as powerful, if not more.. there's always more to experience, discover and learn wherever we go. Magic isn't stagnant fog lingering in one specific place - it travels all around. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:37:00 PM
I love the way you close this traveling poem Timothy, maybe you will slip off the edge of your life and discover the home of your heart my friend. The adoration you express for your nieces is priceless to me, "I've got one Madelyn Amelia who just discovered the moon...Can I wrap them in my arms forever as they go merry go rounds around my heart." You've got beautiful feelings and visions...J.A.B.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 1:52:00 AM
I like the way you think Justin. Perhaps things have to get worst before they get better ... and how much better! My nieces are indeed special to me, and I hope to see them soon, if Lord Willing it all works out. Thank you.
Date: 2/23/2016 7:30:00 PM
Cool new photo too! cheers! :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 1:49:00 AM
Thanks Arthur. I felt that I've had the same photo for too long now ... glad you enjoyed the poem, too :)
Date: 2/23/2016 3:43:00 PM
I do not blame you for worrying about your imminent move, Timothy. For some a new life can be exciting, something to look forward to, but to others there is the loss of family, friends, places, and much more! Releasing some of these thoughts will do you good. It also produced some very expressive lines! ~ Regards // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 1:48:00 AM
Thanks Paul. I think what you say is true ... it's a form of therapy for me. These are my thoughts on the matter at hand in the moment ... but thoughts and feelings can change ... I hope only for the better, wherever I am at.
Date: 2/22/2016 11:41:00 PM
Love epic poems as this, in fact, I will be back to read it again, I always enjoy reading these type of poems a few times!
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Date: 2/22/2016 6:57:00 PM
Go get your feet wet down in Georgia. Lord willing things work out for the best but I have a hunch you will find your way back to the northwest someday.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 1:47:00 AM
Thanks Tim. Wherever I am at I'll just have to make the best of it. I've got friends here and family there (well sort of a mix actually) ... so it's not all bad.
Date: 2/22/2016 3:58:00 PM
Leaving loved ones is never easy, but Timothy, look at the positive side of a move. You're headin' South...warmer weather means you can spend more time outdoors; new vistas to discover. You can still have lemonade. There ARE lemons, water, and lots of sweet sugar in Georgia. Guess you can tell I'm a Southerner...deeper into the South than Georgia. You'll love the food, the hospitality...Give the South a chance and write about it.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 1:44:00 AM
Thank you Lin. I have lots to think about, but whatever I do ... dwelling on the bright side is better than creeping in the shadows. Thanks for the reminder.
Date: 2/22/2016 3:26:00 PM
wow, Timothy, putting it all out there with such emotion. You are at your BEST when you your heart is in it. You are feeling so down, and this actually has enabled you to open up and do some fantastic writing. I sure do wish you well. I hope you find the midnight ticket to Georgia that sails off to the light of dawn!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/24/2016 1:40:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. It's true what you say, it comes out the strongest when the emotions are real and happening. It was therapeutic for me. I hope I can find that ticket too (the uncertainty of it all has left me in a state of limbo currently).

Book: Shattered Sighs