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Waves wash over me   high tide a rushing red   each pull pulsating   and ever present   hitched to a clevis moon   drawn to the gnaw of your wag   my footsteps traverse your trails   echoing a vibrant vibrato and tasting your luscious yields     I can't get back from here   like I ever wanted to     sand slips through my offerings   still here I gaze the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/23/2018 10:20:00 AM
Your moonlit walk on the beach sounds so beautiful, Tim. It reflects the creative ways you appreciate nature. Very nice! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2018 5:13:00 PM
Lovely
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Date: 8/21/2018 10:36:00 PM
Breathtaking!! Your thoughts hold me in this moment. So beautifully expressed. ~ Brandy
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Date: 8/21/2018 8:43:00 PM
I am gazing at your wonderful poem! This seems like a lovely dream!
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Date: 8/21/2018 3:36:00 PM
Sounds like a mystical night, so alluring!
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Date: 8/21/2018 12:51:00 PM
I'm gazing at your wonderful words wishing I could write something so beautiful!hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/21/2018 12:48:00 PM
Beautifully rendered my friend. Sounds like my kind of beach
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Date: 8/21/2018 12:46:00 PM
I am picturing you on that beach, enjoying the tides, the moon, the waves, and the night. Terrific imagery, Tim.
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Date: 8/21/2018 12:37:00 PM
Luscious yields... Couldn't have said it better. This is living!!
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