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Gathering Dust

It gathered them, the dust in the wind, to a one-room building filled with laughter and friends. A time for Johnny to pull Sally's pig tails. Boys hiding frogs in girl's lunch pails. Inkwells for writing, catalogs for reading. Not much else farm kids needing. It gathered the children of Sally and Johnny, and before them, their Daddy and Mommy. In a dark store room, no longer a must, the old school bell gathers a different dust. 0/03/15 Contest: Gathering Dust Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 6/2/2015 8:24:00 AM
another gem from you Arlene,,just love this...
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Date: 4/14/2015 2:53:00 PM
An engaging poem and i like how u captured the scenes in rhyming meter freeverse. And a new idea take on dust and where it gathers. Thumbs up. Nice to read another frm u.
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:12:00 AM
Great Write, Arlene: Your poem reminds of a book I read by David Baldacci, "Wish you were here."
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Date: 3/12/2015 6:21:00 PM
You have created something very special here Arlene. Superb write, I loved it from the moment I stepped into that room...GL
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Date: 3/11/2015 3:23:00 PM
Loved your take on the topic Arlene... the topic had reminded me of Grape of Wrath by Steinbeck which portrays how the Okies and others are united in their migration to california....
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Date: 3/7/2015 1:10:00 PM
You've rung the bell of simpler times. With sentiment and wonderful rhymes.
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:22:00 AM
Very creative and unique. I think you have a winner.
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Date: 3/5/2015 4:15:00 AM
a good theme for the contest!! uniquer one!
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Date: 3/3/2015 10:15:00 PM
What a clever take on the contest. I love it. BG
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Date: 3/3/2015 6:14:00 PM
wow, I think you did a really great job with the theme. Thinking outside the box. I LIKE that.
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