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Funky One

My love for her was bursting and made for tv. She didn't miss a beat Her heart flat lined as she thought of me. In my carelessness I set to hard of a pace. Her Maker waited until I was distracted. Thump.. Thump... Cupid called and the race was won. Childlike with those bloody teeth. Tore the artery I shared with you. Shocked and raced along. Waiting for the defib to catch. Thump... Thump.

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Date: 6/2/2015 11:17:00 PM
PATRICK, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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