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Fugitive

Once a jade vision Briefly twisted in the breeze Now brown and demised

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, Laura..Jimmy
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations Laura, on your success in Raul's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/23/2010 12:28:00 PM
Good use of imagery in your poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Laura. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:25:00 AM
Congrats Laura on your winning poem in Raul's contest... wonderful words to depict the photo..enjoy my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:20:00 PM
Laura, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:19:00 PM
VERY, VERY NICE! I think you captured the image in the picture creatively. The second line is absolutely awesome! I see a big win in your future, Laura. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:01:00 PM
i love this one, looks like a winner best of luck in the contest! ------Ell
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Date: 4/22/2010 6:47:00 PM
Love the title....!!! Wonderful poem, Laura! :)
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