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Frustrated To Death

The feeling in me one of inadequacy The pressure builds boiling my skin to peel Coming apart tearing at the seems Thoughts run ramped life tragic and frantic Pushing me away from my normalcy The uncontrollable me breathing so heavily Sweat dripping off of my mentality Nervously is my charged energy I resign it's too late, no more time So I lie down to do or die and softly cry Wondering why God why am I still alive The revelation haunting me it's so damaging My stomach in my throat where my heart it chokes All the way down to my final breath...and death... 11/27/17 Written for contest: "Emotional anger, hurt, rage" Hosted by: Lewis Raynes Won 4th Place in Contest Results

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Date: 12/15/2017 11:09:00 PM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Brian - keep up the great work! :-)
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/16/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thank you Gregory
Date: 12/1/2017 9:52:00 PM
wow, emotion very strongly expressed, Brian. I hope to never have this feeling so strongly as this!!(guess I came close a few times!) Congrats on a very great win.
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/2/2017 3:04:00 AM
Yes pretty deep the emotions went on this write. I was hoping it would do a little better than it did but I am grateful for the recognition
Date: 11/28/2017 7:03:00 PM
These are the poems of yours that i like the most film of deep dark under meanings. Great work
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Brian Davey
Date: 11/29/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you my friend

Book: Shattered Sighs