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Frozen Heart

warmth he once offered had vanished only twisted words from his deceptive mouth his eyes were empty trying for years to restore his passion where was the tenderness he once gave freely apathy now abounded instead he blamed me at first, so I bought new lingerie got a manicure, pedicure and special hairdo still, he said he felt nothing after I left, I hired a sculptor he chiseled a heart out of ice metaphor for what he was missing the heart was delivered to his door he placed it in an ice bucket went out to seek angelfish many fish he caught that day, but no angels when he brought them home all had been spoiled the frozen heart had melted, just as intended but he never felt warmth inside again sometimes what’s missing cannot be restored
*Entry For Susan Burch’s “Missing” contest Written March 2, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/31/2012 6:32:00 PM
Completely relating to each and every line in this poem...love the seafood analogies especially!...He had the love of his life and didn't realize it...Aimlessly he will roam looking for something that will never satisfy him...You put one thous percent into this relationship it seems..Most women would have gave up so much earlier...What an entry for the theme of Susan's contest...
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Date: 3/12/2012 12:33:00 PM
very deep in hurt here but so well put together dear caroyln ,,,, i hope you are doing well my dear friend .love duncan and ceizar your always a winner in our hearts xxx
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:31:00 AM
for some reason your soupmail icon is gone so I will just tell you here that i am so sorry that you are not on my missing winner's list. I don't know what happened to your entry between my first and second round - I KNOW I did not delete your entry and yet it wasnt' there anymore. i didn't know it was yours until today when i didn't see your name on my list and i looked and recognized your title. this was a good entry and would have been high on my list. so so sorry! please don't hate me, susan
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Date: 3/2/2012 2:48:00 PM
If this were true,what a fool he would be..To not see the love in the heart of thee. <3 Very nice write.
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Date: 3/2/2012 1:37:00 PM
What a sad poem this one is Carolyn! However this write was so very well written, I love the poem a lot! I enjoyed your write due to its awesome way it flows and moves from hope to hope throughout the write! I particularly loved the last line, "sometimes what's missing cannot be restored" it's quite an incredible line! This line sums up everything that your poem was trying to say! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/2/2012 12:21:00 PM
This is wonderful, Carolyn. I enjoyed your poem very much. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/2/2012 12:19:00 PM
You wrote a amazing poem today Carolyn, luck in contest "Missing"/ hope for nr.1. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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