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Frozen

Is it you that I see Looking out so thoughtfully In your mind, do you ever feel adrift? Like the wind filling the sail’s On an old wreck of a ship Slowly disappearing out at sea Will you forever be Lost in my memory It’s hard as I watch you drift away Into the dark rain you slip Lost inside the waves hidden rips There is silence on the frozen artists lips Will you forever be Lost in your memory Sailing out the world on many ships If it’s you that I see Watching out so thoughtfully I would say I love you, but it’s frozen on my lips

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2015 10:11:00 AM

:) thanks for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2015 9:33:00 AM

Hi Cynthia, thank you for the soup mail. But, for some reason I can not respond :(. I hope everything works out for you. I know how it is, to have it all pile up at once. Sending warm hugs... LINDA

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 6/9/2015 9:50:00 AM

me either, I am just happy for the reply, everything has a way of working out, talk soon, :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 10:29:00 PM

CYNTHIA, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 4/6/2015 4:21:00 AM

thank you linda, i had a very nice easter, :), hoping you are well,:)

Daver Austin

Date: 10/2/2014 9:40:00 AM

I like your message and your organization of thought. This is nostalgia well written with a twist - kind of bittersweet. Love, daver

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 10/2/2014 9:49:00 AM

thank you daver, I was reading your haikus. all nice, you are on a nice wave length yourself :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2014 7:19:00 PM

Hi once again, this is deep, and it makes me feel, a drift, from your unspoken lips. Maybe in time, you well share how you feel...Love Linda

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/26/2014 4:08:00 AM

I would always share how I feel with "you" linda, I try telling everyone in my writing but some things lay silent, and lie down wounded, maybe forever, some will heal and come to the surface,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2014 7:11:00 PM

Hi Cynthia, WOW... this has an amazing flow, not once did I lose grip when reading your poem.. WOW.. I just love it, I'm gonna read it again... Linda

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/26/2014 4:03:00 AM

you :) are just a sweet heart linda

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/24/2014 9:19:00 PM

I really loved reading your poem Cynthia, very moving.

Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/25/2014 4:43:00 AM

thank you :)