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FROM POETRY IS OUR STORY Over the rainbow curve where bright hues rush to burst, our hearts that long been drown now finally rush to shore. Hands clasp tight we agreed to follow same path, same doors ghosts from our past, slowly we will erase and nursed... Droplets flow: sweats, smiles and blood written via our quill a fiction for some but to us, they spell the screaming truths of longings, of pains, awaiting to be quenched and soothe. (God Almighty must have guided our footsteps on windless still) Do I need a challenge to grab this one of a lifetime chance or just hear the voice within for it tells its a Heavens giving? Glad, I can only hymn the melody of a heartfelt thanksgiving in the cocoon of your presence, my being fly high as I'm enhanced Adieu to eight thousand miles as you pass it without hesitation Before we met, our heartbeats already dance pas de deux the smiles we shared, so noisy, they broadcasted every clues... (Can it be that this- the beginning of positive vibrations?) I love you, I want you and though my world may fall apart I will not choose to let go instead I will stay with you 'til the fish learns to fly... Allow the years to come through, and us to permit love to grow onwards. Us in every parts! __________________________________________________________ 7:21 pm, September 12, 2015

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Date: 9/29/2015 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Olive, on your win. Your poem is engaging. In poem, usually tells a story, it reckons on inner feelings, pictures a moment and highlight those moments, explores emotions in a tone that could be happy, sad, exciting, mysterious and angry are all we need to complete a poetry of life. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:54:00 PM
Olive congratulations!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:23:00 PM
Hi Sweet Olive..., Congratulations on your win. Forever **SKAT**"
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Date: 9/26/2015 6:07:00 PM
Oh Olive this is a delightful love stroy you share I am so happy for you my friend and congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/26/2015 3:39:00 PM
Poetry just flows from your quill! Congrats Olive! Balveen
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Date: 9/26/2015 11:22:00 AM
Pleased to be back with congratulations on your podium finish, Olive_eloi:) Will be back to you...had little time not only for Soup, but also anything online! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/26/2015 2:05:00 AM
Very lovely dear Olive! Congrats on great win !
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Date: 9/25/2015 9:34:00 PM
Olive, I just by to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/25/2015 1:32:00 PM
So beautifully written, Olive. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/25/2015 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/25/2015 6:43:00 AM
A beautiful story, all the needs laid out waiting, Grats on this winner
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Date: 9/18/2015 2:55:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Felt your voice on the heart olive. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:45:00 PM
Your noble write sized my attention through the whole read. The truth that glow within your write makes the readers to breath it, it touched their heart and soul these make it met with their like and love.... Your write is profound excellence......A.M.
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Date: 9/21/2015 3:08:00 AM
Afolabi thank you so much.. =`) always you comment generously.. =`)
Date: 9/15/2015 4:44:00 PM
You write from the heart Olive_eloi! What might initially have seemed far-fetched has matured into reality. The miles, instead of being a hindrance, served as a challenge to bring two hearts closer to each other. Together with perseverance and faith you will make this special love blossom. All the best and lots of hugs. // paul
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Date: 9/20/2015 2:34:00 AM
Yes, Paul this poem is written from the heart... it is the miles isn't a hindrance when two hearts are sincere and willing to cross it... =`) thanks much always Paul.. ~Olive Eloisa =`)
Date: 9/15/2015 2:06:00 PM
- I feel your voice .... and goes hand in hand with you ...... life choices in words and writing - A wonderful poem, dear Olive - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/17/2015 4:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise..=`) hugs back..=`)
Date: 9/14/2015 4:07:00 PM
I love the title Olive, it's so apt for us. Your poetry simply grows and grows. This poem in particular is beautiful, capturing us, our journey, and our tomorrows, hugs//James xx tmf's xx
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Date: 9/17/2015 4:31:00 AM
Thanks much James.. I am glad you like the title.. ~Olive ELoisa
Date: 9/14/2015 8:26:00 AM
Olive, your poem is so beautifully penned, I love how you write from your heart and soul, well done 7 and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your Knock Us Down With Your Lines Contest, I am deeply honored.
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Date: 9/16/2015 2:50:00 AM
Constance, thank you so much of your wonderful encouraging comment.. =`) I always try my best to myself in every poem I am making... ~~Olive Eloisa
Date: 9/13/2015 11:03:00 PM
oh la la , j'adore la francais
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Date: 9/16/2015 2:35:00 AM
thanks much~
Date: 9/13/2015 5:56:00 PM
til the fish learns to fly. Now THAT will be a long long time, dearie, and I hope your prediction is true. What a sweet happy poem.
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Date: 9/15/2015 4:37:00 AM
Thanks much Andie, I am glad you saw this a happy poem.. =`) So long as we cling to God Almighty, I know all things are possible..~Olive ELoisa
Date: 9/13/2015 10:18:00 AM
Your feelings leap out of your words and ignite the emotional fires alive within your verses. Emile.
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:41:00 AM
Emile I thank you for your kind comments.. I simply write what is it that ran to my heart and thoughts.... somehow, I am making a point that.. not only should my poem paint a picture but more it reflects a heart... =`)~Olive Eloisa

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