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Frightened To Take Two

Her soul was clenched in the hand's of evil A strident deafening scream reverberating in her mind, Searching for where she's broken the most Trying to collect shattered pieces that are hard to find, Even the faintest of lives light disappeared Leaving her to confront dark thought's for a while, Blindly stumbling through saddened day after day Constant loneliness hovering making her fragile, Others oblivious to her heartache retaining her struggle A chaotic mind confused and lost in every form, Ardently staying as strong as can be Undoubtedly the personification of frail is outworn.

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John Fleming

Date: 12/17/2017 3:41:00 AM

There are many reasons why people pick up the pen and begin to write: a compulsion, a desire to become published, perhaps just a need to express themselves. The best of all reasons is to help fix ones self - you have made a good start here! Indeed here is an excellent place to start...you will find many friends here, Kylie. I am happy to become acquainted - pleased to meet you! My warm regards. :) john

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2016 12:39:00 PM

KylIe, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/7/2016 11:42:00 AM

Kylie Bolton,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT