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Fragrance

I saw her by the kitchen window, hands engaged in fixing dinner, a whistle from her lips embroidering the night air. Breaking into song, her face a portrait of beauty and grace. Hands in soapsuds now, cleaning dishes then wiping them dry with the care she would exercise as if she were dabbing away a child's tears. Pots and pans now scrubbed to mirror cleanliness she placed them lovingly back on their shelves, flicks off the switch, plunging the room into darkness, the music receding as she moved from the kitchen into the living room, gradually disappearing until it was if she had never been there. Only her fragrance remained.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/24/2016 5:34:00 PM
What a romantic you are with your artful observance Keith! A tribute to women who make a house a home! #7 ; )
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/24/2016 5:48:00 PM
...and thanks for the 7!!! Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/24/2016 5:45:00 PM
I like to think of myself as a romantic... thank you Connie, much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 5/24/2016 3:45:00 PM
such intense imagery Keith I really love this write:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 5/24/2016 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan... greatly appreciated! hugs, Keith

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