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Fractured, In Fact

I'm broken in pieces I'm fractured, in fact by more than a few inexcusable acts I try to acknowledge each piece of my mind or at least all the bits that I still can find An artist, a writer aspiring poet- perhaps other things I don't even know yet! Coming into my own although now middle-aged recovering wreckage from the wars I have waged I'm broken in pieces yet, hopeful at last for present and future a change from the past...

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Date: 11/16/2019 2:54:00 PM
Hello Rhona McFerran, a change from the past would be a good thing. have a nice day my friend.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/18/2019 3:13:00 PM
Yes, I'm always glad for a change for the good! Hope you're having a wonderful day, too! ;)
Date: 11/6/2019 3:16:00 PM
And at some point we all need a change like that. Well done.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 11/6/2019 10:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! ;)
Date: 10/31/2019 9:03:00 AM
Love the 'recovering wreckage' line. I am also coming to that point in life, great optimistic ending!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/31/2019 4:20:00 PM
Thanks! It is wonderful to be at a point where you have something to look forward to... finally! ;)
Date: 10/30/2019 10:08:00 AM
This is a FAV for me!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/31/2019 12:43:00 AM
Aawww, thank you- I knew you would "get" this! ;)

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