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Fractured English

Your list of words is *dubious, so many came from slang. I fear my up-tight mama would forbid the whole shebang. *Affaire de coeur is French of course and we may only borrow. I also know what’s slang today could be correct tomorrow. If I write an Irish poem, I might use the word *Colleen. Throwing it in just willy-nillly would seem a bit obscene. *Ethereal, is my favorite and lies easy on mind. *Fuzzled? I think you made that up. It is not there to find. *Interstitial? Show me a sentence where that one could be used. The *quintessential meaning of this poem, is that to me, not every word is equal, some should be used sparingly. Don’t think that I *lambaste you, this is written quite in fun, just as the list you gave us, when all is said and done. *Hither and yon is old English and out of vogue today. *Rambunctious, *vacillate, *usurp and *titillate are in the dictionary and are good words to be added to a poet’s vocabulary. On most of the others I will simply have to pass. I would have failed the course for using them in my English teacher’s class.

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Date: 4/3/2012 1:17:00 AM
Excellent write,Joyce.I admire your skill and presentation.very entertaining and educative.exquisite and enjoyable,kudos to you.. CONGRATULATIONS!You deserved this win.,.
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:39:00 PM
congrats Joyce on a glorious write and win for this theme contest .. always so excellent luv..
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Date: 4/2/2012 11:10:00 AM
i am just as baffled too, joyce.. a refreshing write!.... congrats on your dazzling win! :) huggs
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest "For Love Of Language" Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/20/2012 2:36:00 PM
Ah yes you made it so funny Joyce! Now I don't want folks to copy you! YOU I know ..know many more words and than I and I am not a bit concerned over your vocabulary shrinking! Your a perfect teach! Light & Love
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Date: 3/18/2012 2:18:00 PM
You are brilliant Joyce, luck to you in contest. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:04:00 PM
An amazing poem, Joyce. I am simply charmed. You have surely passed in your English Teacher's Class. -Mohammad
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Date: 3/18/2012 11:32:00 AM
Lovely romp through the list Joyce gave me a chuckle! BIG hugs Light & Love
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Date: 3/18/2012 10:17:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this wonderful, witty piece by you, Joyce. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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