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Fourth Dimension

Anacreontic Verse Forgotten love has faded forever now lost in the lips of ice What once was is no more Her body revolts she heaves heavily Get thee away Deliver me Lord back to sanity Let her feel my eyes let her see my needs a soft bed for two now scorned by my touch Let me give my might pray show me the way I will not lose her I cannot go on My life is over 11/13/15

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/21/2015 4:31:00 AM

Love scorned is painful and hard to bear! But time heals...love does not grow on one stem only...a new one might already be awaiting to bloom:) Congrats on a much deserved win, Judy! ~ Regards // paul

Judy Konos
Date: 11/21/2015 5:03:00 AM

Thank you ...

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/20/2015 9:34:00 PM

Desperation shines through. Great write, Judy! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Judy Konos
Date: 11/21/2015 5:05:00 AM

Thank you Kim.....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2015 3:25:00 PM

Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Judy Konos
Date: 11/20/2015 4:03:00 PM

Thank you Sara.....and I must say that is one dumb guy in that photo....whew....some of them can't take a hint! LOL

Jan Allison

Date: 11/19/2015 5:37:00 PM

I found the image and imagery so sad Judy - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 6:04:00 PM

sadness overcomes us when our syllables are limited! LOL

James Inman

Date: 11/19/2015 8:44:00 AM

Interesting write, Judy. I feel the meaning is deeper than the words on the page , but I'm not quite grasping it.

James Inman
Date: 11/19/2015 12:43:00 PM

HaHa, already too many times, I'm afraid.

Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 9:32:00 AM

She doesn't want his love.....likely you don't grasp it because that could never happen to you! Cheers!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 11/19/2015 7:38:00 AM

A turmoil many suffer from! Congrats Judy!

Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 6:06:00 PM

Thanks for visiting...appreciate it

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/19/2015 2:33:00 AM

wow, a fierce write, judy..super congrats and huggs

Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 6:08:00 PM

Thank you Nette....limited syllables make one fierce! LOL

Skat A

Date: 11/18/2015 8:13:00 PM

Judy, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**

Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 6:09:00 PM

Skat.....there ya are...whoopee

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/18/2015 7:46:00 PM

Congratulations Judy

Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 6:10:00 PM

Hello Nayda....thanks for visiting and your name is delightful...

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/18/2015 6:45:00 PM

I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!

Judy Konos
Date: 11/19/2015 6:10:00 PM

And thank you Edward for a unique and interesting contest....

Skat A

Date: 11/14/2015 8:34:00 AM

this is good. SKAT

Judy Konos
Date: 11/14/2015 9:30:00 AM

Listen to you another Queen of poetry.....thanks...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/13/2015 11:37:00 AM

It matters not, Lin and Tim - we don't get to choose. Plus, in life, broken hearts may well heal given enough time, but one doesn't 'heal' after death! Sorry, Judy - it is your page I am being social on! Well, that's because I wanted you to know that I enjoyed your write and then they (down there) distracted me. It is their fault! Very good ... CayCay

Tim Smith
Date: 11/13/2015 2:16:00 PM

True CayCay....I would choose life over anything and, as you can tell, never have experienced death. Sorry for being a distraction : )...btw....new love helps heal a broken heart

Lin Lane
Date: 11/13/2015 1:50:00 PM

lol CayCay..slap my hands... I'm guilty as charged. and yes, Judy...the best food!

Judy Konos
Date: 11/13/2015 1:45:00 PM

No regrets! ...be social as much as you like.....thanks for visiting

Lin Lane

Date: 11/13/2015 11:29:00 AM

Sometimes a broken heart is more painful then death...or seems so. Tim thinks so. Nice one, Judy.. LA lady...me, too.

Judy Konos
Date: 11/13/2015 1:47:00 PM

Louisiana Lin.....we are home to the best food ever.....

Tim Smith

Date: 11/13/2015 11:00:00 AM

Death seems like a better option than a broken heart...lovey Judy

Judy Konos
Date: 11/13/2015 1:48:00 PM

sometimes things are not always as they seem....but coming from a good looking guy....I wouldn't worry about it...thanks for coming over ....appreciate it......