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Foul Smelling Words

Falsehood reduces the number of pages from the bible originality through many lips comes out hyped or feeble. Mouth, linking to ears like a poisonous drug and for the mind, banana peels replacing the rug. What is purple is tagged navy blue and many stay distracted from the actual clue. Events hidden from the sun, a busy-body encodes to analyze the lives of others in mean, median and mode. Columns of dense smoky words, spreading so chronic has made the devoted, rejected by the Catholic. Ringing in the ears of many is a false alarm in a split second, flames cover the farm. Revelation of privacy which shouldn’t be known proves that rumours function with hormones of their own. When blood begins to stain the empire the only reason would be the presence of a vampire. Nothing attracts curiosity, when life is too good a peaceful society puts news in a bad mood. Broken stories accepted without a needed wait potentially makes the bearer, embarrassment’s bait.

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Lady Labyrinth

Date: 8/8/2019 3:39:00 AM

I think I shall add this poem definitely into my favourites. Love it. Broken stories, revelations, intrigue.

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:59:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend. You are far too kind for this. I apologize for my very late reply.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/17/2019 12:39:00 PM

Wonderful couplet. false alarm, loose talk about others, rumors etc spread like fire in forest. Every stanza bears a good meaning. Keep it up. With love........//Manmath//

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Manmath Dalei

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/12/2019 4:40:00 PM

Hi Funom: Each couplet emitted the search for truth. Believing all the words in the bible can only be done by faith, not nescessarily truth. Great write!

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:57:00 AM

Thank you so much my Italian friend. You are far too kind

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/9/2019 2:20:00 PM

You do pen the truths; deep and honest.

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:56:00 AM

Thank you so much for this thought of me. You are far too kind my friend.

Manoj Kumar

Date: 1/31/2019 11:30:00 PM

So powerful, so beautiful... You are blessed for having the skill to be able to write and I am blessed for being able to read this beautiful work. God Bless

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:55:00 AM

yeeeaaah.... Our network here is indeed a blessed one. Thank you very much for your encouraging words.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/21/2019 5:37:00 PM

A poem to be read from both sides of the fence. Stimulating and provocative. Love it, it is a message, that there are some, who know the score.....

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:54:00 AM

sure Harry. Sorry for my late reply. Thank you very much.

Ifeanyi Obinefo

Date: 1/7/2019 11:35:00 PM

This is excellent, well thought of and the message is very clear

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:54:00 AM

Thank you so much Ifeanyi

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/6/2019 2:41:00 PM

Hi Funom, such a powerful poetic verse from your golden pen. Such a meaningful write. This is one that does make the reader think my friend. An excellent write. Have a wonderful Monday. your friend always....Mike.

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Vladislav, you are far too kind.

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 1/5/2019 9:15:00 PM

This poem is of a very high caliber and I am a better poet for having read it. Thanks for sharing!

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:52:00 AM

Wow...I am short for words, so sorry for replying late. Your comment is truly encouraging.

Constance La France

Date: 1/5/2019 12:46:00 PM

Funom, a very thought provoking poem ~

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend

Silent One

Date: 1/5/2019 12:09:00 PM

Powerful words my brother..

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much, my esteemed friend

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 1/5/2019 10:56:00 AM

Such a profound and insightful message here, Funom. I delight in reading your poems! Many thanks for your kind comments re my recent poems and I pray you will have a Happy, Healthy and Prosperous New Year - Bob

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Robert.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/5/2019 10:53:00 AM

So much meaning and power in your words..you have depicted amazing life lessons in your poem, Funom.

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Vijay

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/5/2019 10:40:00 AM

powerful words where untruths are marked as false reality... remarkable poem, funom...huggs

Funom Makama
Date: 7/22/2021 5:48:00 AM

hugs, hugs, hugs.... Thank you so much Nette