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He was old not stupid

A wealthy old man in his fifties, Loved a girl he thought was just nifty. Said, Will you marry me, I'm just fifty-three? But she married a man in his sixties. The old man did not take this lightly, And his friends warned him she was flighty. He wanted her back, But alas and alack, She'll return on the day you turn ninety. The young girl's first husband did die. She returned to her first love to cry. Said, Will you marry me, I'm as lost as can be? He said, Not this time but nice try.

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Date: 3/4/2022 8:04:00 AM
ha ha, good for him!
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Date: 1/19/2022 10:51:00 AM
Lol, lol seems the old chap learnt a little bit about life in her absence - well it seems she had this coming to her , perhaps again when she tries one in his nineties, but his someone in the family will have their eye on his fortune, so she wont stand a chance. Good one Judy. hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/19/2022 1:00:00 PM
Thanks bunches Jennifer. It was a fun write. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/18/2022 9:00:00 AM
Creative way to go with this one. Some like them old and rich don't they or at least what they think is rich. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/19/2022 12:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/18/2022 6:42:00 AM
The tale and limerick were both excellent. Judy, I wish you the best.
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/19/2022 12:55:00 PM
Thanks bunches Lasaad. It was a fun write and true to life. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/17/2022 6:24:00 PM
guess he is not that stupid after all
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/17/2022 7:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Mystic Rose. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/17/2022 3:55:00 PM
I enjoyed the story and limerick. Blessings ~ Debra
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/17/2022 7:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Debra. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/17/2022 1:45:00 PM
As the saying goes once bitten twice shy. Tom
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/17/2022 2:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom. Right you ae. God Bless, JB
Date: 1/17/2022 9:39:00 AM
Brilliant limericks. Incredible how many money grabbing people there are in this world. Loved your limericks.
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Judy Ball
Date: 1/17/2022 10:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor. It was fun to write. As you say there are a lot of users out there. God Bless, JB

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