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A lattice of vines covers this resting place Some headstones fallen, lying in the grass, That I drift back into hedges of t i m e, Where markers seem to hum life’s stories. This quiet glade, an archive on a ridge, keeps secrets untold where stones are marked~ As a cloak of vines protects all those gone by remembered not by any living heart. I wonder if those reposed could share their tales Before crumbling away as nameless dust; Their sorrowful mysteries so hidden Entwined now, with the vines’ languishing blooms. To leave this place ~ where silent souls abide Is to be aware of my unknown days, For when, in dimming light, inscriptions crack Will I be forgotten, like these old headstones? ------------------------ Overgrown With Vines Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings 10/3/2016

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Date: 10/9/2016 4:06:00 PM
Nette, beautifully penned and touching. CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:39:00 AM
Again a great write Nette.
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:21:00 AM
Oh Nette- you will NEVER be forgotten! loved this poem lovely lady :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/8/2016 2:44:00 PM
Great write Nette...Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/5/2016 11:41:00 PM
Come lay a flower at my side, how could I have missed this, loved this one!
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:15:00 AM
A beautifully touching write Nette. Many years ago I managed a one hour photo lab and it was amazing how many people brought in photos of cemeteries and headstones. I loved your line, "This quiet glade, an archive on a ridge."
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:39:00 PM
I remember reading this wonderful poem Nette, and commenting on it, but I don't see my comment anywhere. Anyway please know how much I enjoyed this moving piece. ; ) 7
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Date: 10/3/2016 10:43:00 AM
With such a poetic talent difficult would be to be forgotten dear, nette! A seven!
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Date: 10/3/2016 10:18:00 AM
Forsaken in life, forgotten in death. I think we would all like to be remembered by someone because vanity is a human trait we all share. A sad poetic write, nette.
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Date: 10/3/2016 5:32:00 AM
Poetical lines fearless before the 'hedges of time' ... What else we may seek ?
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:30:00 AM
Signed and delivered with profound metaphors on the cycle of life - death.
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