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Forgotten Fields

Resting are the willows, the clouds cotton pillows, she lay beneath the open skies with dandelion tears in her eyes. Does she drift with the breeze, this lonely girl with emotional seas? All the world is faded lines, losing crisp by daylight blinds, she knows not where she wants to be, only that she wants not me. Belonging where nature grows, the essence of soft shadows, bring her peace at time of war, she stays here forever more.

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Date: 6/3/2018 9:17:00 AM
It’s nice to see you spreading your beauty once again. Welcome back Casarah.
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Date: 5/16/2018 3:35:00 AM
This is a beautiful piece.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 5/16/2018 3:18:00 PM
thank you
Date: 5/13/2018 11:48:00 PM
The willows whisper, clouds gaze above, These forgotten fields, that once grew love. Eye's sparkle gone, dust in its place, A fading flower, hope's tear-stained face. The day is ending, Hues kiss me goodnight, Soft shadows cruel tease, That it's all right.
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Date: 5/13/2018 11:30:00 PM
Your perfections pull me in.. lovely in splendor and agony.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 5/15/2018 1:56:00 PM
thanks :)
Date: 5/13/2018 3:18:00 PM
oh such sad imagery Cas and it is such a special day to see you back on soup:-) love to you, Tom and Abby:-) hugs Jan xx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 5/15/2018 1:55:00 PM
Figured it was about time to sneak in here, it has been awhile. keeping busy with schooling abby. hope u are well!
Date: 5/13/2018 8:00:00 AM
Beautifully written :)
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Casarah Nance
Date: 5/15/2018 1:53:00 PM
thank you

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