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Forest Night

Babies' hungry cries Mother rises, spreads her wings The night holds its breath entered into Haiku You Contest

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Date: 4/19/2013 9:03:00 PM
Llinda are you still around. Do you remember Winter's Promise, your poem I loved so much. if you are not too late to check out my current contest, I am simply posting a list of my fave poems and that one would be sure to make my list. HOpe you can get your poem entered. how are you?
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Date: 6/10/2010 8:11:00 PM
Birds are most allert to their babies' needs, Linda. Thanks for your comments today today. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/7/2010 5:32:00 PM
Birds are remarkable creatures. I can only fly in my mind and with the help of a plane.
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:01:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku, Linda. Best wishes with your entry in the Haiku contest. Lainie
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Date: 6/5/2010 8:35:00 PM
oh, my gosh was this for the haiku contest that closed out already? If so, what a shame it did not get an award. I think it is outstanding. So nice to meet you tonight. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/4/2010 8:32:00 AM
Great haiku and the last line gives life to the forest at night! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:57:00 AM
love the haiku linda, thanks for your comments harry
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Date: 6/4/2010 5:28:00 AM
enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:44:00 PM
A wonderful thought. Nice images. Good luck, Linda
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Date: 6/1/2010 7:38:00 PM
Wonderful write Linda ..good luck in the contest.. surgery went well.. I just did a blog about it which u can view and comment on if u like.. laser eye surgery is tricky and my doc is the best but its an ordeal and so nerve wracking too... but happy to have so much support from great soup friends like u... and my own family and friends.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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