Forest Concert

Wind whispers through leaves Somewhere in pine scented shade Tree of songs concert

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2012 4:23:00 PM

lovely haiku xoxo pd

Rollo West
Date: 12/28/2012 8:59:00 PM

Hi Pd, thank you so much. Rollo

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/28/2012 8:04:00 AM

like this Rollo, gets the immagination thinking,, bet it's about the coming of spring... this concert

Rollo West
Date: 12/28/2012 9:00:00 PM

Hi Harry, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/27/2012 11:14:00 PM

dear Rollo,,,I really enjoyed your concert..so very much..thank you for breezing such lovely songs <3

Rollo West
Date: 12/27/2012 11:49:00 PM

hello Sukmawati, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/27/2012 10:19:00 PM

Really a breeze reading this poem Rollo, great poem :D-hug, Yanny

Rollo West
Date: 12/27/2012 10:37:00 PM

Hi Yanny, thank you so much for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/27/2012 9:56:00 PM

Yes, creation songs. We can really hear them. I remember hearing it one time walking in the wood. Love it, Rollo :)

Rollo West
Date: 12/27/2012 10:38:00 PM

Hi Toquyen, thank you so much for stopping by, and your comment. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/27/2012 9:49:00 PM

This is a truly brilliant and wondrous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible poem this evening! What a powerful image you have painted with this piece! I especially loved the second line, filled so much with imagery! The whole poem stands perfectly on its own! What an awesome write, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 12/27/2012 9:50:00 PM

Hello my friend, and thank you for coming by and commenting. Rollo