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The leaves fall slowly Beetles veiled in falls blanket The wind blows gently

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/8/2015 9:50:00 PM
I can see that perfectly, nicely done.
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/8/2015 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Casarah, again my appogies for not thanking you for the visit earlier. love Shane xxx
Date: 1/8/2015 9:20:00 PM
Very beautifully written. I see you have talent.
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/8/2015 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, i think i posted it too soon though i have a revised version that i will repost tomorrow. love Shane
Date: 1/7/2015 10:12:00 PM
I enjoyed your haiku -- self-sustaining nature! 7
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/7/2015 10:15:00 PM
Thank you David, I have been reading a few by Jan Allison and thought i would try my hand at one. Have a great day.

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