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As the big fish jumps from water into the air And the twilight sits in blue joy on its scales I pick my words from your lustrous hair And use them in my sentence for my sails As the colours keep painting your toenails August 9, 2017

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Date: 8/16/2017 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Probir. ~*
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Date: 8/14/2017 5:26:00 PM
I was so delighted to read your poem..Thanks for the entry in my contest your participation was encouraging and uplifting to me..This was a very creative work..I would like to see that fish..Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 8/13/2017 1:21:00 AM
Congtrats for your win. Nicely written.
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Date: 8/12/2017 6:59:00 PM
Beautifully weaved.. delightful poem!
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Date: 8/12/2017 1:41:00 PM
Really cute. Congrats
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Date: 8/12/2017 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations for your fine win Probir :)
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Date: 8/9/2017 4:45:00 PM
Absolutely lovely! Fave!
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Date: 8/9/2017 4:17:00 PM
Wow, Probir, How unique! Each sentence went from one subject to another but somehow they blended like an abstract poem. my deepest compliments!
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Date: 8/9/2017 3:34:00 PM
This is heavenly writing my dearest friend, Probir! I really love it!
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Date: 8/9/2017 10:55:00 AM
Great one Probir ! :)
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