For Tonight

Beyond the gloom, your soul has shone the way You stir the peak of my night holding each vision in sight the blue of your eye roams thru my sky filling me with such delight For tonight: I crave to dance in your moon (radiate emotion) as we both now are attuned knowing how it's right I bask in your light feeling that I'm not immune stroll with me, our steps are one with the sand let my heart lead to your hand we'll gaze off afar wishing on stars together we understand

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/16/2018 3:19:00 PM

What a beautiful walk in the sand with your words.

Jean Murray

Date: 8/15/2018 1:51:00 PM

It's so nice when souls meet.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/14/2018 1:52:00 AM

I looked up Romanticism in the dictionary, and well , this poem was the definition!!!

Anna Hopper

Date: 8/13/2018 11:56:00 AM

I always love your, beautiful, eloquent word choice. Excellent!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/13/2018 6:24:00 AM

And for every night too! With poetry as good as this, love it Tim.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/12/2018 6:47:00 PM

So beautiful and romantic. "the blue of your eye" There is something about the soft touch of blue eyes, that melt me all over. Always have. Don't know why. Your poem holds the sweet touch of love. ~ Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2018 11:26:00 AM

This is so nice Tim. Many great lines flowing in this one! I enjoyed this today :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/12/2018 9:34:00 AM

Perfect penning for the Perseids in town ;) xomo

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/12/2018 9:33:00 AM

Perfect penning for the Perseids in town ;) xomo