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Flirtation

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he looked at me and whispered low ~ if ye ken my meaning, lass, say so aye, I knew what those eyes meant ~ I smiled at him, and my answer was sent

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Karen Croft

Date: 1/6/2024 12:52:00 PM

Romance in two lines! Love it.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/8/2024 6:05:00 AM

Merci. Karen.

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/5/2024 6:28:00 AM

A brilliant rhyming monoku Lin, one which tells its own story, even without a title, flirtation personified, not always easy to to get across, in two short lines, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2024 6:51:00 AM

I wrote it in my phone notes months ago and forgot about. Thanks for the compliments

Deb M

Date: 1/4/2024 2:45:00 PM

Just brilliant Lin!! Romantic and the last line perfect! Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2024 6:48:00 AM

Thank you very much for noticing it’s a new one, Deb. I like this length.

Deb M
Date: 1/5/2024 6:29:00 AM

P.S….l love your new profile photo Lin you look lovely! I really like that hair style on you! Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/4/2024 2:51:00 PM

Hi Deb and thanks for the comments, Chick. Sending you soup mail.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/4/2024 2:33:00 PM

ah, the power in a man's eyes and a woman's lips. Nicely done, Lin. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 1/4/2024 2:40:00 PM

Or the other way around, Sara. My evening will be a glorious one... yours too, I hope. Thank you!

John Lawless

Date: 1/4/2024 2:20:00 PM

Oh, you coquettish nymph you.....

Lin Lane
Date: 1/4/2024 2:40:00 PM

Watch it, or I'll start batting my eyelashes at you. ;-) Thanks, John.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/4/2024 8:33:00 AM

The eyes say it all Lin. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 1/4/2024 11:31:00 AM

I truly believe that, Tom. Thank you.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/4/2024 8:14:00 AM

cool flirtation!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/4/2024 11:30:00 AM

Thank you for liking this one, ~AA.